Tag: dialogue

TPG Week 36: Pulling Back The Curtain (Updated!)

| September 2, 2011 | 4 Comments
TPG Week 36: Pulling Back The Curtain (Updated!)

We pull back the curtain some on a script submitted to me for true editing. Let’s see what Brave One John Vinson’s first draft looked like, shall we? (Also, there were some technical difficulties, but those have now been squared away. Thanks!)

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TPG Week 35: Know Your Medium

| August 26, 2011 | 18 Comments
TPG Week 35: Know Your Medium

This week, we have TWO Brave Ones entering The Proving Grounds! Adam Burbey and Luke Noonan, ladies and gents! Let’s see what I mean when I say “Know Your Medium.” (That’s your cue to click and come in.)

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TPG Week 34: Padding Isn’t Your Friend

| August 19, 2011 | 47 Comments
TPG Week 34: Padding Isn’t Your Friend

        Welcome back to The Proving Grounds, one and all! This week, we have another Brave One who is new here. Let’s all welcome Lance Boone, as he brings us the first tale of Heaven’s Hitman Related Posts:TPG Week 73: Another Copyrighted Character!TPG Week 69: Bring Your Readers With You For The […]

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TPG Week 33: Writing A Well-Known Superhero

| August 12, 2011 | 9 Comments
TPG Week 33: Writing A Well-Known Superhero

We’ve got Carlos Parra, a new Brave One entering The Proving Grounds! Come inside and see his rendition of a well-known superhero!

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TPG Week 32: New Writer Woes

| August 5, 2011 | 19 Comments
TPG Week 32: New Writer Woes

We’ve got a new Brave One in Georg Syphers inside, folks. Let me preface that there’s a LOT of red. Lots of lessons learned here. Make with the clicky and see!

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TPG Week 31: Small Tweaks

| July 29, 2011 | 1 Comment
TPG Week 31: Small Tweaks

Once again, Tyler James has stepping into The Proving Grounds! Let’s see what kind of Small Tweaks I can make, shall we?

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TPG Week 30: Necessary Evils

| July 22, 2011 | 7 Comments
TPG Week 30: Necessary Evils

Welcome back to The Proving Grounds, where we once again have Brave One John Lees! Come inside and see as we talk about necessary evils!

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TPG Week 29: Establishing Shots Are Important

| July 15, 2011 | 7 Comments
TPG Week 29: Establishing Shots Are Important

We’ve got a new Brave One stepping into The Proving Grounds! Let’s see how Connor MacDonald does!

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TPG Week 28: Starting Late

| July 8, 2011 | 5 Comments
TPG Week 28: Starting Late

We have returning Brave One Jamie Fairlie up on deck! Let’s see how he does!

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TPG Week 27: Border Time!

| July 1, 2011 | 13 Comments
TPG Week 27: Border Time!

Jon Parrish is back! Let’s see how he does this time! Come on in and see how he tackles Border Time!

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TPG Week 26: Drawing Readers In

| June 24, 2011 | 9 Comments
TPG Week 26: Drawing Readers In

Once again, John Lees is back, doing his best to draw the reader in! Does he succeed? Make with the clicky and see!

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TPG Week 25: Don’t Get Sued

| June 17, 2011 | 16 Comments
TPG Week 25: Don’t Get Sued

Kyle Raios is BACK! And I think he wants to get himself sued! Make with the clicky and see what I mean!

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