Tag: Critique

TPG Week 211: Minor Tweaks Needed

| January 9, 2015
TPG Week 211: Minor Tweaks Needed

Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week, our Brave One is no stranger to us: Sam Roads! (I call him Felix because I keep mixing him up with another Sam R. Remember, folks: I’m not smart.) We’ve got Sam-antha (another Sam!) LeBas in purple, I’m the guy in […]

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TPG Week 210: New Year, Same Bad Storytelling

| January 2, 2015
TPG Week 210: New Year, Same Bad Storytelling

  Hello, one and all, and welcome back to the first installment of The Proving Grounds for the new year! This week, we have a new Brave One in Daniel O’Reilly. We have Liam Hayes in blue, and I’m the suave one in red. Let’s see what kind of tour guide Daniel is as we […]

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TPG Week 209: Year’s End

| December 27, 2014
TPG Week 209: Year’s End

Hello, all, and welcome back once more to The Proving Grounds! This week is our year’s last, and we have a new Brave One to see it: Amit Moshe Oren. We also have Samantha LeBas in purple, and I’m the guy in red, as always. Related Posts:TPG Week 250: Complete Rewrite NeededTPG Week 225: When […]

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TPG Week 208: Wordiness Is Next To Confusion-ness

| December 19, 2014
TPG Week 208: Wordiness Is Next To Confusion-ness

Hello, all, and welcome back to The Proving Grounds! This week, we have a new Brave One in Rin Kiyoko. I’m alone this week, so there’s no one else to blame for missing stuff. It’s all on me. Rin and I, locked in mortal(ish) combat of right vs crazy, good vs lazy, badass vs no-ass… […]

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TPG Week 206: A Decent, Short Entry

| December 5, 2014
TPG Week 206: A Decent, Short Entry

  Welcome back, one and all, to The Proving Grounds! This week, we have a Brave One who’s no stranger here: Frank Martin. I’m going to be going it alone this week–Liam had some personal things to take care of. So I’m here, all by my lonesome. It’ll be fine. Frank and I, mano a […]

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TPG Week 205: Don’t Submit Before You’re Ready

| November 28, 2014
TPG Week 205: Don’t Submit Before You’re Ready

  Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! We here at ComixTribe wishes that you all had a happy, healthy and safe Thanksgiving. (I know that I ate enough for most of you. Especially the pie…) This week, we have a new Brave One in Paul Im. We have Samantha […]

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TPG Week 204: Language Can Be A Barrier

| November 21, 2014
TPG Week 204: Language Can Be A Barrier

Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week, we have a new Brave One in Nanda Irfan Lauzan. We’ve got Liam Hayes in blue, I’m the guy in red, and we’re going to see what Nanda has in Related Posts:TPG Week 250: Complete Rewrite NeededTPG Week 225: When Even […]

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TPG Week 201: Stories Need Real Endings

| October 31, 2014
TPG Week 201: Stories Need Real Endings

Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week, we have a new Brave One in Jose Pereira. And for added bonus, today is my wedding anniversary! Nine years to my lovely wife. I love you, sweetheart.   Related Posts:TPG Week 281: The End Of An EraTPG Week 256: Same […]

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TPG Week 200: Blast From The Past Resubmission

| October 24, 2014
TPG Week 200: Blast From The Past Resubmission

Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week, we have someone who’s on stranger to these parts. We welcome back Brave One Kyle Raios! We’ve got Liam Hayes in blue, I’m the sedate one in red, and we see what Kyle has done with Related Posts:TPG Week 183: A […]

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TPG Week 198: How To Bore In Five Pages

| October 10, 2014
TPG Week 198: How To Bore In Five Pages

    Welcome back, one and all, to The Proving Grounds! This week, we have another entry from Chelsea Smith! We also have Liam Hayes in blue, and I’m looking rather svelte in red, and we’ll see what Chelsea does with Related Posts:TPG Week 78: Readers Want Cake!TPG Week 218: Writing Challenge Entry 3TPG Week […]

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TPG Week 196: Blackenstein Was Better…

| September 26, 2014
TPG Week 196: Blackenstein Was Better…

  Welcome back to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week, we have a new Brave One in JP Polewczak! We also have Liam Hayes in blue, I’m the guy in red, and we’ll see what JP has to say about Related Posts:TPG Week 145: Too Much Stuff In The BagTPG Week 83: Use […]

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TPG Week 194: Science Fiction Needs Research

| September 12, 2014
TPG Week 194: Science Fiction Needs Research

Welcome back, one and all, to The Proving Grounds! This week, we have a new Brave One in Chelsea Smith. We also have Liam Hayes returning this week in blue, I’m the wild one in red, and we’ll see if Chelsea is good enough to really invoke the Bard in A Clone By Any Other […]

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