Tag: Critique

TPG Week 32: New Writer Woes

| August 5, 2011 | 19 Comments
TPG Week 32: New Writer Woes

We’ve got a new Brave One in Georg Syphers inside, folks. Let me preface that there’s a LOT of red. Lots of lessons learned here. Make with the clicky and see!

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TPG Week 31: Small Tweaks

| July 29, 2011 | 1 Comment
TPG Week 31: Small Tweaks

Once again, Tyler James has stepping into The Proving Grounds! Let’s see what kind of Small Tweaks I can make, shall we?

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TPG Week 30: Necessary Evils

| July 22, 2011 | 7 Comments
TPG Week 30: Necessary Evils

Welcome back to The Proving Grounds, where we once again have Brave One John Lees! Come inside and see as we talk about necessary evils!

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TPG Week 29: Establishing Shots Are Important

| July 15, 2011 | 7 Comments
TPG Week 29: Establishing Shots Are Important

We’ve got a new Brave One stepping into The Proving Grounds! Let’s see how Connor MacDonald does!

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B&N Week 29: Becoming A Better Writer

| July 12, 2011 | 0 Comments
B&N Week 29: Becoming A Better Writer

You think that desire is all it takes to be a good writer? Come on in and let me tell you what I think of that notion.

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TPG Week 28: Starting Late

| July 8, 2011 | 5 Comments
TPG Week 28: Starting Late

We have returning Brave One Jamie Fairlie up on deck! Let’s see how he does!

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TPG Week 27: Border Time!

| July 1, 2011 | 13 Comments
TPG Week 27: Border Time!

Jon Parrish is back! Let’s see how he does this time! Come on in and see how he tackles Border Time!

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TPG Week 26: Drawing Readers In

| June 24, 2011 | 9 Comments
TPG Week 26: Drawing Readers In

Once again, John Lees is back, doing his best to draw the reader in! Does he succeed? Make with the clicky and see!

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TPG Week 25: Don’t Get Sued

| June 17, 2011 | 16 Comments
TPG Week 25: Don’t Get Sued

Kyle Raios is BACK! And I think he wants to get himself sued! Make with the clicky and see what I mean!

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TPG Week 24: Dialogue Needs Pacing, Too!

| June 10, 2011 | 5 Comments
TPG Week 24: Dialogue Needs Pacing, Too!

John Lees is BACK! This time, he’s going to help us to illustrate that Dialogue Needs Pacing, Too! (Make with the clicky! John’s an enjoyable read!)

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TPG Week 23: Giving Info Organically Through Dialogue

| June 3, 2011 | 14 Comments
TPG Week 23: Giving Info Organically Through Dialogue

Jon Parrish is this week’s Brave One! Let’s see what I mean by Giving Info Organically Through Dialogue.

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TPG Week 22: Late Starts

| May 27, 2011 | 22 Comments
TPG Week 22: Late Starts

This week’s Brave One is John Lees. Come on in and see what I mean by Late Starts.

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