Tag: Critique

TPG Week 248: A Problem Of Pacing

| September 26, 2015
TPG Week 248: A Problem Of Pacing

Welcome back, one and all, to another instalment of The Proving Grounds! This week, our Brave One is Sean Mills. We have Liam Hayes in blue, we have Ryan Kroboth with the pencil assists, and I’m the guy rocking back and forth in red, talking to the shadows in a shadowless room. Let’s all see […]

Continue Reading

TPG Week 247: Another Waste O’ Time

| September 18, 2015
TPG Week 247: Another Waste O’ Time

Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week, we have another entry from Solomon Steen. We also have Liam Hayes in blue, Ryan Kroboth rocking the pencils, and I’m the idiot in red in the corner. Let’s see what Solomon has with Related Posts:TPG Week 224: Padding and the […]

Continue Reading

TPG Week 246: Backstory Is Not THE Story

| September 12, 2015
TPG Week 246: Backstory Is Not THE Story

Welcome back, one and all, to The Proving Grounds! This week, we have a new Brave One in Edward Davis. We also have Liam Hayes in blue, a pencil assist from Ryan Kroboth, and I’m the guy gibbering in the corner in red. Related Posts:TPG Week 196: Blackenstein Was Better…TPG Week 190: Artist Turned…Writer? (Only […]

Continue Reading

TPG Week 245: Lots O’ Problems

| September 5, 2015
TPG Week 245: Lots O’ Problems

Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week, we have Chris Vernon as our Brave One. We also have Liam Hayes in blue, and let’s welcome the pencils of Ryan Kroboth, who’ll be swooping in every now and again in order to help us visualize some things. Ryan will […]

Continue Reading

TPG Week 244: Pacing Problems

| August 29, 2015
TPG Week 244: Pacing Problems

Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week, our Brave One is no stranger to these parts: we have Ronnie Massey stepping in! We also have Liam Hayes in blue, and I’m the cheerleader in red, and we’re all going to see how Ronnie did with the Superhero Retirement […]

Continue Reading

TPG Week 240: When Dialogue Is The Real Failure

| August 2, 2015
TPG Week 240: When Dialogue Is The Real Failure

Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week, we have a new Brave One in Solomon Steen. We also have Liam Hayes in blue, I’m the guy shivering in the corner in red, and we’re all going to see if Solomon can take care of his Related Posts:TPG Week […]

Continue Reading

TPG Week 235: Different Mistakes Made

| June 26, 2015
TPG Week 235: Different Mistakes Made

Welcome back one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week is something of a treat. We get to go over a script that we saw a few weeks ago. Amit Sharma has submitted his script again, so we get to see what was learned. We have Liam Hayes in blue, I’m […]

Continue Reading

TPG Week 234: Screenplays Aren’t Comic Scripts

| June 19, 2015
TPG Week 234: Screenplays Aren’t Comic Scripts

Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week, we have a new Brave One in John Long. We also have Liam Hayes in blue, and I’m the jerk in red. We’re all going to see how John does with Fat Chance Related Posts:TPG Week 218: Writing Challenge Entry 3TPG […]

Continue Reading

TPG Week 233: A Nice Effort, Indeed

| June 12, 2015
TPG Week 233: A Nice Effort, Indeed

Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week, we have a Brave One who’s no stranger here: Ronnie Massey! We also have Liam Hayes in blue, and I’m the cranky one in red. Related Posts:TPG Week 279: Choose Your Own LoD!TPG Week 277: Second Issues NEED To Start WellTPG […]

Continue Reading

TPG Week 228: Not Bad For A First Timer

| May 8, 2015
TPG Week 228: Not Bad For A First Timer

Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week, we have a new Brave One in Eric Brackett. We have Liam Hayes in blue, I’m the lazy one in red, and we’re all going to see how Eric handles the Related Posts:TPG Week 257: Bad Taste Makes Me StopTPG Week […]

Continue Reading

TPG Week 227: Not Too Bad At All!

| May 3, 2015
TPG Week 227: Not Too Bad At All!

Welcome back, one and all, to another installment of The Proving Grounds! This week, we have a new Brave One in Aaron Williamson. We have Samantha LeBas in purple, and I’m the jerk in red, and we’ll see what Aaron is up to in the SALOON written by: Aaron Williamson Related Posts:TPG Week 190: Artist […]

Continue Reading

TPG Week 226: Lots Of Firsts (And None Of Them Good)

| April 24, 2015
TPG Week 226: Lots Of Firsts (And None Of Them Good)

Hello, one and all, and welcome back to The Proving Grounds! This week, we have a new Brave One in Jason Duke! We also have Liam Hayes in blue, I’m the ogre in red, and we’re all going to go on the journey Jason takes us on in Adonai Related Posts:TPG Week 225: When Even […]

Continue Reading