Comments on: TPG Week 63: An Actual Edited Script (2 of 3) http://www.comixtribe.com/2012/03/09/tpg-week-63-an-actual-edited-script-2-of-3/ Creators Helping Creators Make Better Comics Sat, 11 May 2013 02:39:37 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.5.1 By: Mary http://www.comixtribe.com/2012/03/09/tpg-week-63-an-actual-edited-script-2-of-3/#comment-2712 Mary Sun, 11 Mar 2012 20:37:03 +0000 http://www.comixtribe.com/?p=1225#comment-2712 Great Job Don I knew you could do it. Keep the ideas going.

]]> By: Yannick Morin http://www.comixtribe.com/2012/03/09/tpg-week-63-an-actual-edited-script-2-of-3/#comment-2710 Yannick Morin Sun, 11 Mar 2012 18:11:22 +0000 http://www.comixtribe.com/?p=1225#comment-2710 This was a great read, Don!

I particularly liked the way this plays out all between children. You could’ve had the mother step in there but you chose to keep it at the kids’ level. That lends the whole story a very special magical quality.

Fantastic work! I’m very eager to see the end result!

]]> By: Justin Martin (@RsquaredComicz) http://www.comixtribe.com/2012/03/09/tpg-week-63-an-actual-edited-script-2-of-3/#comment-2707 Justin Martin (@RsquaredComicz) Sun, 11 Mar 2012 16:33:29 +0000 http://www.comixtribe.com/?p=1225#comment-2707 Great work Don!

]]> By: Noel Burns http://www.comixtribe.com/2012/03/09/tpg-week-63-an-actual-edited-script-2-of-3/#comment-2704 Noel Burns Sun, 11 Mar 2012 14:26:59 +0000 http://www.comixtribe.com/?p=1225#comment-2704 It was a great job Don. I agree sometimes you can out think yourself trying to be creative. Go with the ones that come to you and see where they lead. Could be you meet your own monster at the end of the tale as well.

]]> By: Don Pankievicz http://www.comixtribe.com/2012/03/09/tpg-week-63-an-actual-edited-script-2-of-3/#comment-2682 Don Pankievicz Sat, 10 Mar 2012 22:55:55 +0000 http://www.comixtribe.com/?p=1225#comment-2682 Final Draft is a HUGE help. I used to spend more time formatting then writing.

I was really happy how this turned out. I literally saw that Journeyman was accepting submissions and started writing this right away. My little girl sat on my lap as I typed and sent this over! I wasn’t sure how good it was going to be, but I knew I loved it and it made me think of my kids.
Sometime spur of the moment brings the most inspired pieces.
Thanks, Steven, there really wasn’t as much red as I thought there would be.

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